For Zorro
Posted by MissMeliss at 5:36 pm in (Bad) Poetry

From CafeWriting:
Remember that everyone you meet is afraid of something, loves something, and has lost something.

Write either three short verses or one long stanza about these three things - fear, love, and loss. Any form of poetry is fine - haiku, a sonnet - whatever works.

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I’m not a poet. I dabbled in verse ages ago, but I generally think in sentences. Still, it’s a good exercise to play with other forms once in a while. I don’t post verse or fiction to my actual blog. That’s what this is for.

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I. Fear
Monsters with headlights whizzing by
Cold rain falling from the sky
Hiding for naps
Begging for scraps
Constantly running on tiny feet
This is the life of a stray on the street.

II. Love
He reminds me of the childhood poem
About a little shadow
Up and down the stairs, he’s at my heels.
In the kitchen, he’s underfoot
On the couch or in bed, he curls against my hip
Puppy kisses tell me what he feels.

III. Loss
Day by day, I’m seeing him fade.
He’s withdrawing from us a little
As if he knows his clock is winding down.
His muzzle is grey where it once was black
The “eyeliner” that helped earn his name is nearly gone
He’s taken to barking at the other dogs in town

Ten isn’t old for a Chihuahua, they say
But they forget the epilepsy, the years on the street
And the dental issues, and the heart disease.
They just see the spry little man with the sickle tail
Ears erect, nose a-quiver, eyes all big and round
Like a plumber, the vet never hears him sneeze.

I know our other dog feels second best,
Which is ridiculous because I love them both
Differently, because MissCleo is a dog for play
While Zorro, my little man, is content to be quiet
Always near, his quiet presence warming my heart,
I don’t know how I’ll deal when he finally slips away.

For Zorro has 6 Comments

  1. [...] For Zorro, by Melissa [...]

  2. This made me cry from verse one.

  3. You may say you’re not a poet, but I beg to differ. Having two little dogs of my own, with very distinct personalities, I was hooked on this from word one.

    These are lovely odes to Zorro, and fit the prompt perfectly. I hope he’s able to shadow you for a long time yet to come.

  4. This made me cry. i love that feisty, brave and sweet Zorro.

    i have seen him be devilish, and protective of my little Abigial dog, and I have seen him in the torurous throes of an epileptic seizure.
    It is a beuatiful poem.

  5. I too dabbled in poetry back in the day, and decided my talents lay elsewhere. The difference between us? I think I was right…

    You invoke a lot of emotion there - a tough thing to do with just a few words on a computer screen, even if you feel them intensely yourself. Good job.

    And hopefully your fears are unfounded. Zorro’s a strong guy for such a small and frail-looking package. He might be slowing down a bit, but he’s not stopping. Not yet.

  6. How sad and sweet. Written so well.

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