Comments on: For Zorro http://www.zenitopia.com/2007/10/19/for-zorro/ writings by MissMeliss Wed, 20 Aug 2008 08:20:41 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: easywriter http://www.zenitopia.com/2007/10/19/for-zorro/#comment-11 easywriter Mon, 05 Nov 2007 22:14:03 +0000 http://www.zenitopia.com/2007/10/19/for-zorro/#comment-11 How sad and sweet. Written so well. How sad and sweet. Written so well.

]]> By: Wintermutt http://www.zenitopia.com/2007/10/19/for-zorro/#comment-10 Wintermutt Sun, 21 Oct 2007 23:42:14 +0000 http://www.zenitopia.com/2007/10/19/for-zorro/#comment-10 I too dabbled in poetry back in the day, and decided my talents lay elsewhere. The difference between us? I think I was right... You invoke a lot of emotion there - a tough thing to do with just a few words on a computer screen, even if you feel them intensely yourself. Good job. And hopefully your fears are unfounded. Zorro's a strong guy for such a small and frail-looking package. He might be slowing down a bit, but he's not stopping. Not yet. I too dabbled in poetry back in the day, and decided my talents lay elsewhere. The difference between us? I think I was right…

You invoke a lot of emotion there - a tough thing to do with just a few words on a computer screen, even if you feel them intensely yourself. Good job.

And hopefully your fears are unfounded. Zorro’s a strong guy for such a small and frail-looking package. He might be slowing down a bit, but he’s not stopping. Not yet.

]]> By: Susan http://www.zenitopia.com/2007/10/19/for-zorro/#comment-9 Susan Sun, 21 Oct 2007 20:51:23 +0000 http://www.zenitopia.com/2007/10/19/for-zorro/#comment-9 This made me cry. i love that feisty, brave and sweet Zorro. i have seen him be devilish, and protective of my little Abigial dog, and I have seen him in the torurous throes of an epileptic seizure. It is a beuatiful poem. This made me cry. i love that feisty, brave and sweet Zorro.

i have seen him be devilish, and protective of my little Abigial dog, and I have seen him in the torurous throes of an epileptic seizure.
It is a beuatiful poem.

]]> By: Becca http://www.zenitopia.com/2007/10/19/for-zorro/#comment-8 Becca Sun, 21 Oct 2007 20:46:09 +0000 http://www.zenitopia.com/2007/10/19/for-zorro/#comment-8 You may say you're not a poet, but I beg to differ. Having two little dogs of my own, with very distinct personalities, I was hooked on this from word one. These are lovely odes to Zorro, and fit the prompt perfectly. I hope he's able to shadow you for a long time yet to come. You may say you’re not a poet, but I beg to differ. Having two little dogs of my own, with very distinct personalities, I was hooked on this from word one.

These are lovely odes to Zorro, and fit the prompt perfectly. I hope he’s able to shadow you for a long time yet to come.

]]> By: Sara http://www.zenitopia.com/2007/10/19/for-zorro/#comment-7 Sara Sat, 20 Oct 2007 22:10:28 +0000 http://www.zenitopia.com/2007/10/19/for-zorro/#comment-7 This made me cry from verse one. This made me cry from verse one.

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