Comments for Zenitopia http://www.zenitopia.com writings by MissMeliss Wed, 20 Aug 2008 08:42:04 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 Comment on (3) Do Virgins Taste Better? by Janet http://www.zenitopia.com/2008/05/26/3-do-virgins-taste-better/#comment-46 Janet Thu, 05 Jun 2008 20:08:46 +0000 http://www.itinerantimagination.com/?p=14#comment-46 I can't wait to hear more: "<i>...There is always a price, Elise. In this case, dinner. My rooms. Tonight.</i>" I can’t wait to hear more: “…There is always a price, Elise. In this case, dinner. My rooms. Tonight.“

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]]> Comment on Butterflies by Cafe Writing » Blog Archive » March Participants (All) http://www.zenitopia.com/2008/03/25/butterflies/#comment-37 Cafe Writing » Blog Archive » March Participants (All) Sat, 05 Apr 2008 12:49:53 +0000 http://www.zenitopia.com/2008/03/25/butterflies/#comment-37 [...] Butterflies, by Melissa A. Bartell [...] [...] Butterflies, by Melissa A. Bartell [...]

]]> Comment on Salt by Cafe Writing » Blog Archive » March Participants (All) http://www.zenitopia.com/2008/03/24/salt/#comment-36 Cafe Writing » Blog Archive » March Participants (All) Sat, 05 Apr 2008 12:49:11 +0000 http://www.zenitopia.com/2008/03/24/salt/#comment-36 [...] Salt, by Melissa A. Bartell [...] [...] Salt, by Melissa A. Bartell [...]

]]> Comment on Salt by One More Believer http://www.zenitopia.com/2008/03/24/salt/#comment-21 One More Believer Wed, 26 Mar 2008 16:26:00 +0000 http://www.zenitopia.com/2008/03/24/salt/#comment-21 what a beautiful story of love... what a beautiful story of love…

]]> Comment on Breathless by MissMeliss: Escribition » Blog Archive » Breathless (an excerpt) http://www.zenitopia.com/2008/01/08/breathless/#comment-19 MissMeliss: Escribition » Blog Archive » Breathless (an excerpt) Wed, 09 Jan 2008 01:31:53 +0000 http://www.zenitopia.com/2008/01/08/breathless/#comment-19 [...] You can read the rest here. [...] [...] You can read the rest here. [...]

]]> Comment on Breathless by Cafe Writing » Blog Archive » January Participants http://www.zenitopia.com/2008/01/08/breathless/#comment-18 Cafe Writing » Blog Archive » January Participants Wed, 09 Jan 2008 01:27:23 +0000 http://www.zenitopia.com/2008/01/08/breathless/#comment-18 [...] Breathless, by Melissa [...] [...] Breathless, by Melissa [...]

]]> Comment on Necessary Rituals: The Bath by Cafe Writing » Blog Archive » December Participants http://www.zenitopia.com/2007/12/11/necessary-rituals-the-bath/#comment-16 Cafe Writing » Blog Archive » December Participants Wed, 12 Dec 2007 04:07:17 +0000 http://www.zenitopia.com/2007/12/11/necessary-rituals-the-bath/#comment-16 [...] Necessary Rituals: The Bath, by MissMeliss [...] [...] Necessary Rituals: The Bath, by MissMeliss [...]

]]> Comment on For Zorro by easywriter http://www.zenitopia.com/2007/10/19/for-zorro/#comment-11 easywriter Mon, 05 Nov 2007 22:14:03 +0000 http://www.zenitopia.com/2007/10/19/for-zorro/#comment-11 How sad and sweet. Written so well. How sad and sweet. Written so well.

]]> Comment on For Zorro by Wintermutt http://www.zenitopia.com/2007/10/19/for-zorro/#comment-10 Wintermutt Sun, 21 Oct 2007 23:42:14 +0000 http://www.zenitopia.com/2007/10/19/for-zorro/#comment-10 I too dabbled in poetry back in the day, and decided my talents lay elsewhere. The difference between us? I think I was right... You invoke a lot of emotion there - a tough thing to do with just a few words on a computer screen, even if you feel them intensely yourself. Good job. And hopefully your fears are unfounded. Zorro's a strong guy for such a small and frail-looking package. He might be slowing down a bit, but he's not stopping. Not yet. I too dabbled in poetry back in the day, and decided my talents lay elsewhere. The difference between us? I think I was right…

You invoke a lot of emotion there - a tough thing to do with just a few words on a computer screen, even if you feel them intensely yourself. Good job.

And hopefully your fears are unfounded. Zorro’s a strong guy for such a small and frail-looking package. He might be slowing down a bit, but he’s not stopping. Not yet.

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